Monday, May 12, 2008
Breaking news[Jordaan fell into the swimming pool]
Did you know that when I had a running Exam I run around the soccer field. After that We go to the swimming and we take of our shoes and wash our feet in the swimming pool, and I saw my friend [Jordaan] fell into the swimming pool. He hang on something, Pak Lili help him to take him out of the swimming pool, and he need to get his clothes dry or borrowed Pak Lili's clothes. Charlie was beside him when he fell.
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6 comments:
Why The paragraph is so short?
I liked the way you included most of what happend.
Wow!interesting article.Like the picture though.
Wonderful job Jes!
Like the pics!
Miranda
Hi.... Jes
you have great sentences to describe the story!
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